Well, I'm reviewing here because it makes you look special. But honestly, I think that first poem(part?) of this is one of the best things you've ever written. Yes, it's short, but it's true and it's beautiful and it fits a good poetry pattern so well!! I'm proud of you, haha.

Aw this is so sweet. I absolutly loved it. This is amazing, just frickin amazing. Keep up the great work.