   avidelecteur 2005-02-04 . chapter 1That was not "computer sciency"! I disagree. It wasn't even technical-sounding. I think it was very nice. I always like poems about winter and snow. They're muchly fun, and you did a very nice job with this one. Keep it up!~avidelecteur |
 ufpncc1966 2005-01-22 . chapter 1There are some great descriptions in this one, e.g. "crystalline dewdrops," "delicate treetops."
The single word lines are effective as well. |
 pennydeath 2004-09-20 . chapter 1A couple of lines in there sounded a bit too technical - "super-cooled" and "stratosphere" and possibly "crystalline". All the other words sound all whimsical and light and pretty, but those are like COMPUTER COMPUTER SCIENCE DEFINITIONS.
I still quite like it. The images are pretty. |
 Silent Star4 2004-09-20 . chapter 1Very nice, love all the beautiful imagery of winter. Well done. |
 mapofyourhead 2004-09-18 . chapter 1very pretty. nicely done! |
 simpleplan13 2004-09-18 . chapter 1very very nice descptions! |
 CW-nerd-12 2004-09-17 . chapter 1Cool. Beautiful images. It gives off an aura of delicateness, just like snowflakes. |
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