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| diamondforever 2008-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseI thought that this story moved way too quickly, with too much exposition and not enough explanation. It just didn't feel realistic to me. Sam was a one-dimensional protagonist, and pretty shallow. |
| silverscreen crush 2007-12-16 ch 20, | abuseuh..this is getting kinda boring and whatever happened to tanya? |
| proChef 2007-12-07 ch 25, | abuseman, i found myself hoping that sam and mel would at least stay as good friends. i don't know if that might have been inferred, but i definitely didn't feel that. this is a great story, imma go check out the rest :D |
| fanficfanatic 2007-08-18 ch 25, anon. | abusebrilliant story. :D |
| PrettyAwkward 2006-12-29 ch 25, | abusei read the other story before this one and yeah you really don't need to read this one first to understand the other one but this does give more information that fills in some gaps. this one was good.i liked it. |
| me 2006-10-21 ch 25, anon. | abuseI really liked this story |
| GirlxAnachronism 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseOMG i loved your story.One things though, the beginngin started out so fast. I was like woah. But throughtour the rest of the story that whole timing thing was good.Also after the begining you never here of tanya again! where'd she go man?I do like how it went from tanya to ashley and then ahsley then mel. You never knew who she would end up with. even though ashley had a bf it seemed idk..I personally wanted her to be with ashley. That ending! OMG! i was so upset!I was very upset when they broke up.But the lonliness, that feeling of broken, SAM! big tough girl! broken..I felt so bad for heri almost cried (Lol uhh im an emotional person)Anyway good job! |
| blah 2006-03-11 ch 25, anon. | abusei liked this story, although i wish it had a happy ending :( poor Sam, btw i LUV the name Piper, its just so fun to say piperpiperpiperpiper |
| marille 2005-12-08 ch 25, anon. | abusegod.. i loved your story..but now im depressed. im hating you end. ok i am not.but the end.. nonono. why do they break up?this depresses me now..damn PS: sorry if my english sucks.i cant speak english that well. |
| i-rite-gud 2005-11-28 ch 25, | abuseI can't wait to read AIIWABC, I bet it'll be awesome. |
| i-rite-gud 2005-11-28 ch 24, | abuseThat was the end? It was a sad ending but good nonetheless. I can't wait to read your next story, I hope it will be as amazing as this one has been! |
| deli-lise 2005-09-17 ch 23, anon. | abusesadness coming on. |
| i-rite-gud 2005-09-12 ch 23, | abuse*twitch* Suspense... *twitch*twitch* that was a good chapter and I can't wait until you update again so I can see what's wrong with Mel and how the story finishes off!! |
| i-rite-gud 2005-08-23 ch 22, | abuseHAHA! First review of the chapter! lol I apologize for my insanity.That was an awesome chapter!! I can't wait until you update again, this is an awesome story, I really like it. |
| i-rite-gud 2005-08-12 ch 21, | abuseAwesome chapter!! I can't wait until you update again, this story rocks!! |