What song/poem is that in itallics? Did you write it? It's really good.

This is an incredible story. You can read the italics seperate from the story and both parts still make sense. Together they compliment each other, one showing her thoughts and what's going on, the other giving the background. It's incredible, and I REALLY want to know what happens next. There's Fortune as the main character, the first girl mentioned- good fortune? Bad fortune? Unfortunate? Fortunate? I look forward to finding out- and meeting the other girl.

It gives me the creeps... the poem is incredible, and the words used beside it just freak me out. It's wonderful, and I want to read more! Unfortunately, due to the curse of the computer, I must wait... for now...

Shame on you! Starting a new story and not telling me! Well, I can't get enough of immortals in storylines, so onto my favourites it goes!