Ha! That was good. It was definitely a diffrent apporach to the whole hero/villian attitude. But what happens when a bad guy wins, and there is no good guy?

Very good. It's nice to see others point out a lot of things I've held to be true about villains. For all their planning, all their brainpower, they know what they're doing. They know who their foe is going to be, and could well defeat them well before they're a problem.
And yet, they don't...Great job. Keep it up.

cool fable
really sheds villains in a more favourable, admirable even, light
well done
*smiles*

Wow. This is pretty good; for your debut piece, you put out a good one! You're going on my favorites; I have to see whats next.

hey, this is REALLY good! a very interesting character study, something you read with one eyebrow raised whilst nodding subconsciously at all the good points. i absolutely loved this sentence:

"So kill me now, I would expect nothing less, but remember, I have given up my good name, tainted forever in the years to come, so that yours would be spoken with reverence."

that's a very powerful and original way of looking at it, and i commend you for the insight. nice touch the way you told it as an actual story, too (or rather, the conclusion to a story). your voice came through the writing really well; i got the sense that it'd probably be fun to debate stuff like this with you, lol. anyway, awesome work! keep it up! ;)

dang dude...that's hella good...didn't know u had it in you...just.
wow.
can't wait to see waht else you have stored in that head of urs

Very good. Great idea and told well. You wouldn't happen to be a fan of Neil Gaiman?