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| Ayx 2007-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseHaha I love it. I wonder why I've never seen this before. It's great Ayx |
| Thenardier 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThe last line has an extra syllable, however, the entire haiku is so poignant and powerful. An excellent piece. |
| my failure 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abusei love this.awesome awesome job!! |
| thank you thoughtful 2005-06-06 ch 1, | abuseraw and awesome. this totally eats your face. i love it. |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abusebeautiful poem about a tragedy, the best mixture x weasel within x |
| Dracula, Lord of the Vampir... 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abusea bit odd, but interesting nevetheless. Did ya miss me while i was gone? if u did, srry. if u didn't oh well. P.S Can u review my latest poem, 'Death's Knell'? |
| poetic abortion 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseDark and simply lovely. !~* Noelle*~! |
| Tempest Breeze 2004-12-27 ch 1, | abusegreat work, you need to post more. |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-12-23 ch 1, | abuselovely |
| Mime 2004-11-28 ch 1, | abuseDevastating and dark, but beautiful nonetheless. How do you do it, really? |
| midnight temptress 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abusehey,mei chuen.its me shermaine lerr.hehe thx for the compliment. **crucified romance bleed sugar infused with gall shakespearean suicide** very deep and morbid. keep the inspiration comin babe. much love, ~shermaine~ |
| Fairy Tale Lies 2004-11-11 ch 1, | abuseNicley. That was swell. |
| the colours red and blue 2004-11-03 ch 1, | abuseIt's like breathing in a suffusion of crystallized rose petals & magic wand fairy dust, but in the presence of Mercurcio. Gah, lovely. |
| tiger lily8 2004-10-18 ch 1, | abuseHeavy. The second line is surprising but resonates with meaning. Good job! |
| linaeve 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, the entire thing. can't pick a phrase that i particularly liked :D |