"Your poetry has absolutely no emotion in it.
"The players, the pimps, the smooth-talkers..."
Oh my God.
Please, for all of our sakes. Stop writing unless you can actually produce emotion. They have no real rhythm, the words they use are amazingly trite, and I really feel like I'm reading poetry from a rock.
Nothing personal."
What the heck! that is so not true. Just because she uses a different pose in her poetry does not mean its not good. For instance some of the best poems contain curse words or such. It sometimes adds a certain element to the poem. Its like how sometimes a punch line just isnt as funny with out a cuss word in it. or how "I don't care" isnt as effective as "I don't give a damn" you choose your word choice based on the mood you want to portray. And as far as the poem has no rythmn: she writes free verse. It doesnt have a major over riding rhythm. I believe honey what you are talking about is cadance. The cadance of this poem isnt as good as her others but its still there. Britt is a very good writer and for her to stop would be an injustice to who she is. How would you like if some told you to stop writing? Could you? Would you even give a damn? Did'nt think so. So in conclusion, LAY OFF. If you can't say something nice don't say anything at all. If you must critique please give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. If you do say something nice as well. A person always listens to criticsim better if you tell them what they did right too.
to britt: you are a very good writer don't listen to what dumb butts like this reviewer say. Never stop. Its one of your passions and the audience can tell. love ya babe. XOXO ~*~Ash~*~

Your poetry has absolutely no emotion in it.
"The players, the pimps, the smooth-talkers..."
Oh my God.
Please, for all of our sakes. Stop writing unless you can actually produce emotion. They have no real rhythm, the words they use are amazingly trite, and I really feel like I'm reading poetry from a rock.
Nothing personal.