BRILLIANT STORY

This was really cute, some very nice fluff.

Aw. :-) That was very well done.

Nice job. I enjoy reading short stories because it is interesting to see if a writer can pull together and describe an idea all in one chapter. I think you did this effectively, and I really liked this story. Great job! :)

-Sarah

So I just now read this... wow... I really wish I could have something like that...

anyways... it was beautiful. just like you. i love it.

Aww, this is so adorable Kayli! I thought it came together nicely, the way you wrote it, so I wouldn't worry about that too much. I am such a sucker for sappiness, and I saw your profile before I read this- and I most certainly do not think that you've lost your touch. You're an amazing writer.-Faded Soulfire

Very wonderful! You are so good and I love you to death!
Brianna

Wow. I love it. And I hate you for you are far too good at writing and I am far too bad. lol.
But yes. It was very incredibly good.