ah this is nice. nice capture of in reality how cinderella would feel. i like it. cinderella was a good fairy tale! ;)

Thank you for the review! You have a lovely tone expressed with a nice vocabulary. I most certainly relate to the prospect of awaking to another harsh reality. Writing seems to be my only escape from that reality and reading your work has reminded me to appreciate that. Keep up the good work. ~*Mettie*~

it's definatly orginal and i really liked it. differnt is always welcome!

Very original and well-captivated. This is going on my faves.