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| miss-elty 2005-12-30 ch 2, | abusehahaha. this was amusing. (it's inandout_obk from lj)... hahaha.= =) jensen sounds awesome... so when does the next bit come out?? lol. |
| cheesecake.thief 2005-12-23 ch 2, | abuseI have one thing to suggest for Starr. Dump an ice cold glass of water on his...ahem. |
| Death Princess 2005-09-11 ch 2, | abuseok now trust u 2 come up with something so hilarious. lol. starr is so up herself. god wat a ** its funny. and the whole jenson thing where he pukes on her sleeve then her shoes. dude gross. an underwear model lol now thts classic. sure is imaginative. :p wen are u updatin cliche waiting 2 happen? im dieing 4 an update here. oh and jensens cool. his friend at the coffee shop wat an idiot. who asks his frend 2 ask out his gf? :p poor jenson he had his ego hurt. anyways bib and UPDATE SOON! mes amigos |
| Lydia 2005-07-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey, great story.Kinda relieved to hear you say you'll be on holiday. I get travel sick too and I absolutely hate it! Oh and the fact that it's totally embarassing puking up on the seat next to you-luckily for me it was empty at the time! ;)I also like the fact that you've spelt 'star' with two 'r's instead of one. Totally unique.Well, update soon, plz! ^_^ |
| HaveSomeProzac 2005-03-25 ch 2, | abuseLoved it! |
| Seraindipity 2005-03-13 ch 2, | abuseI quite like it... Your stereotyping seems to be going a bit overboard, but generally, your writer's voice rocks, and I can tell this'll be a good one.And may I just say:I f*ing LOVE YOU! YOU ARE THE GREATEST REVIEWER IN THE WORLD! I killed my self writing that chapter, and then I got like, two reviews for it, telling me it was a good update. I wanted to DIE! And then I got your review! And I actually acted, (believe it or not) giddy. I was giddy. I think I split my face in half when I smiled. And then I siad, who is this person who understands my writing more than any other reviewer and appreciated it in the way I wanted all who read it to? So I went to your bio... AND YOU ADVERTISED MY STORY! And I cried. I feel so completely stupid, I swear to god I could actually shoot myself in the head because, quite honestly, I hate it when other girls do that. It just ** me off, y'know? And you live in Australia? Now THAT is cool. Australia is third on my list of places I must go... like a sort of post-highschool excursion, or something akin to that, at the very least. First on the list is New Zealand, second is Greece. I'm weird in that way. So yes. I just wanted to tell you that you made my day... and probably my week. month... year...and other vaguely imbecilic times or things that people give too much credit for...*sigh* I will most definitely be checking in. |
| Bananalogic 2005-03-01 ch 2, | abusei'm interested to see if you throw in a few characters as supporting actors to mellow out and foil your stars' drama. keep working on it. luv hannah banana |
| WatrPriestess 2005-02-23 ch 2, | abuseI must say.. Ilove you! This is a great story, I hope for more soon. |
| Hotkitty 2005-02-15 ch 2, | abusehi again! underwear model ...lol... i cant wait 2 see how this fic goes. its realli...original. btw thx 4 putting me in ur bio :D u made me so happy! I LUV THIS AND PLZ UPDATE THIS AND ACWTH SOON! btw hunter has been updated *sweatdrops* finalli. u rok dude! catch on msn some time! |
| Hotkitty 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG THIS IS SO FUNNY! OMG! Lol! i couldnt stop laughing, thw whole coffee boy thing and the lesbian thing LOL. this seems realli kuel so far! next chappie 4 me... |
| greatgrl 2005-02-08 ch 2, | abuseOMGThis is so freeakin great! (lol my name's greatgrl hahahaha) I luv Starr's bitchy attitde. It works!! who ever said u needed to be a geeky, quiet, sarcastic girl to get a hot guy? Starr's obviously bitchy and gets what she wants and sarcastic! i hope he gets nicer tho coz why would jensen wanna be wit some1 who treats him like crap all the time? tho jensen doesn't exactly give her an easy time either! hehehehe. update soon! :D |
| SleepingAngel Unlogged 2005-02-07 ch 2, anon. | abuse=) Thank you, I juest made ur reviews odd...but thank you! |
| Small Marshmallow 2005-02-05 ch 2, | abuseHey viv! come on, man, update! This is a GOOD, GREAT story. If you do not want to do the "research" I WILL DO IT FOR YOU! Jez. PS Give us description of both Starr and Jensen. HAHA is that from some particular person ::coughjensenapplescough::??Nyeh, just asking. VIV COME ON THIS IS GOOD PLEAASE UPDATE! |
| Jolly B 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is cool, i reay like it. Lol, it's quite humouring...is that even a word?anyway, Starr is quite a nasty little critter hey? oh well,can't wait for it to change. Or if?update soontoodles |
| SleepingAngel Unlogged 2005-02-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseNow it's even! Tell me who she is **! |