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| Billimarie 2004-11-18 ch 1,  | abuseThanks for the review...came back to repay the favor :) lol...I liked this, even smiled at the beginning, but then there was the twist at the end and I couldn't help but review and say: great job ! -n |
| Jitterrue 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseoh the irony. interesting little poem |
| orangepen23 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abusePretty good. If I might say one thing, though, It sounds like you are not writing about the heartbreak but rather about the face you showed others after the heartbreak. The actual heartbreak(at least for most people) is the pain, and the pain alone. |