Well, it moves right along, and I like the pecking order that you have created here. And I am of the firm opinion that pixies are only good when served between two pieces of bread with mayo.

This is a good start for this story.

I just saw your mosre recent story, and I am intereseted, because you seem to have some knowledge on the subject.

It is intereseting about the Selkie, and I recall reading about them some years ago, and their skin. It seems related to the Japanese legend about the angels. It is funny how differenst cultures come up with the same kind of legends.

I had read at one point in time that the phouka could appear as a horse, but you do mention other animals. And they sound a bit like the Kobolds that i am writing about. Maybe your story will get me in the proper mood to get back to writing Bane of Rendsberg.

Oh, and my penname is a character in my stories as well. I hate to put numbers behind a name.

I loved this chapter. It was my favorite. That little girl was so obnoxious and rude it amused me and I am pretty sure I want to make her real and keep her in my house. Honestly though, I love how this entire chapter played out. Maggie was just to perfect. It was so awesome. I really loved this chapter. SOrry, but I did.

Okay, this is a great way to continue it. It is so unexpected that he finds another being like him, it's really, really, fabulous. ANd The name is lovely, as always.

Okay, this was a great way to start it off. I love your descriptions of everything, they are really well-written and I am getting these wonderful mental ideas of what it looks like or would look like and it's just really nice. I love how you just havem him thrown into portal, it's really good because of how you just dove into the story.

Okay, this is the prolouge and it made sense of most everything you attempt to explain to me. I like the way you gave the details and such. made the rest of the story easier to understand.

Very cool story. I like things I can read all the way through and not have to beg for updates , so this was exceptionally nice. I love the characters and the story line. You write with a hand that reads as well-practiced. The description and dialogue are well-written and everything is worded flawlessly. I thought it interesting how the title covers the reason he's where he is in the story, but completely leaves out anything to do with your characters or the actual storyline involving Garen. Your Faerys are original and different, which I always count as a big plus when reading a fantasy story - Even if simply because the same old types of fantasy creatures get a little boring. Over all, I think you are an awesome writer with an awesome story, and I hope you can get your stories published someday!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I loved it. You did wonderfully on this story. I ,for one, love it so much. Anyone who doesn't is probably stupid. *innocent grin* Not that I am condemning any of you. On second thought... I am. If you don't like Garen's stories you are an idiot. Wow, I am harsh. well, not harsh. Just opionated. *grin* Sorry if I offend anyone. Okay, rant over. Wonderful job on this story though. I hope you write more someday, since this has become one of my favourite stories. (Next to Call Me Whistler and A Key Around His Neck. favourite poem is obviously Ginny's Song. *grins* ) I hope you write more stories with Garen in them. He is an awesome character. Oh, and to Legolas'_Mistress who reviewed Carrot, you suck. You clearly don't understand the character Garen or the writing genre of fantasy at all. I am displeased with you greatly. In fact, I am MAD at you for saying what you said. Garen is a wonderful and very thought out character who is amazing. I think you shouldn't have such a steriotype on self-inserts. Okay, second rant over. I just had to say that. Anyways, Garen, Wonderful story. It made me laugh, and cry, and smile lots. Great job! can't wait for more from you, Mister! Oh, and send me the last transcript of that convo with Ashley. Plleasse. I wanna read it. Until We Meet Again,-*-Your Insane Friend-*--*-GiNnY-*-

YESH! UPDATED! Just when I thought you'd given up... *tears streaming down face* This was so good! Beautiful! Sad, but beautiful. I'm so sad Maggie is dead! And she was such a cool character! Well, even the best die. Sadly. Poor Garen. I wanna hug him. *hugs Garen* Poor boy...phouka...boy phouka... I loved it like whoa! I can't wait till the next update. Speaking of updates I'm going to that now. TTYL! Carryin' Da Bannah!-*-Your Insane Friend-*--*-GiNnY-*-

Dude, talk about a cliffhanger. Gah. (This is timeis1800hours from FF.N, by the way. Followed a couple links, found myself here.)

This is a really engaging story. Not my genre at all, but your writing is so good that I get drawn into it anyway. Plus hot mortal babes! Does it get any better?

Speaking of which... it seems like the relationship between Maggie and Garen developed really fast. One moment she's introducing herself, the next moment she's claiming he's in love with her, and (what seemed like) barely a week later they're "romping in the haystack," so to speak. I'm all for Garen having some fun, but it did seem a little speedy.

Anyway, you said you wouldn't update until someone reviewed, so... here's a review! Please update?

I LOVE YOU! YOU UPDATED! And just when I thought you would never update again... you never cease to amaze me with you writing. I LOVE IT! As I remind you habbitually. Hehe. And I see you had May Day in there...that was interesting. lol. Everyone knows what may day is right? I hope so. or else they shall be very confused... anyways, This chapter was very nicely written. No spelling flaws or grammar or anything like that. You and your perfectness. One thing though, YOU BETTER BLOODY UPDATE! I shall await the next chapter, Garen. Quick question though, how old is Maggie? Just thought I'd ask... you probably said and I just don't remember. Hehe. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! ^_^Your Insane Friend,-*-GiNnY-*-

I really like this one. It's interesting. I've always been intruiged by magical stories with faeries and such. *Sigh* *It's so magical ~Princess Jasmine, Aladin* Keep up the good work!

YOU UPDATED!! YES!! Have I ever told you how much I love you? ((thinks hard)) I did, yesterday actually. when you updated your other story. hehehe. LOVED THE CHAPTER!! Again, I don't see anything you could've improved on the chapter. you made my favourites list on this site! (your the only one so far! mwhahaha!!) Garen, as I've told you, is one of my favourite characters ever! I hope you post the other story you wrote. I'd love that. Just like I'd love it if you updated again.^_^ "The fingers of my left hand twitched irritably as she fumbled clumsily with the lock." hehe. Poor Garen. That must've been killer to watch. Knowing it would take you only a second to open it. Ah, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! Can't wait for an update! UPDATE!Your Insane Friend,~**~GiNnY~**~

yes! YOU UPDATED! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! ((happines)) Ha! For once my review made a difference...though maybe not. You were probably going to update anyways... ((Sigh)). Another great chapter all the same. I didn't see anything you could've improved on that chapter. Very, very well written. You really are an amazing writer!! Garen is officially an awesome character! Loved it lots! Can't wait for more! Your Insane Friend,~**~GiNnY~**~BTW- I fixed the stuff you suggested I do on my story. I posted the next chapter on fan fic if you wanna read & review it sometime...

Very interesting. Very nicely written. Props for everything. It truly is too bad you've stopped writing this story, because I really enjoyed it. I wish you'd write more sometime...I suppose I'll have to read some of your other stories to find out more about Garen, eh? I suppose I will, seeing as how he's alot like Whistler. (A character I am familiar with. *wink*) I hope you decide to write more sometime... That'd make me happy...~**~GiNnY~**~