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Manju
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseoh man, i feel like this a lot. great job putting this on paper. this is why i love poetry. it's a great way to vent. anyway, i read a lot of your poems and Fortuitusaum's and you guy's are both great. keep it up.
E. A. Tetje
2004-12-03
ch 1,
abuseYeah, I know how that feels... hope it isn't always like that though... I just noticed that you said you like Jars of Clay and DC Talk... I love them! What is your favourite song from Jars of Clay? I think mine is "Beautiful" (Jars of Clay, The Eleventh Hour)
Sharpie Red
2004-12-01
ch 1,
abuselol...same here...great job!!
Confuzion in a Nutshell
2004-10-20
ch 1,
abusei think its rather sad you felt that way. it was nicely written, good structure. keep it up tipsy. im gonna start writing again so look for me.
sorrowfilledeyes
2004-09-26
ch 1,
abuseawesome poem I know exactly how you feel, keep up the good work
CowGirl1987x2006
2004-09-21
ch 1, anon.
abusegood, tell it from the heart.
you don't always have to hold u'r toungue... if u want to u can saw whatever u want to me.. even if it's not ment for me... you're a kool guy. i'm happy i know ya... just sucks that we so far apart *HUGS*
CowGirl
harshwarsh
2004-09-21
ch 1,
abusethe poem was good. it's from the heart; what u truely r tired of and also a bit of what u want by telling what ur tired of. great stuf keep witing.
if u ever have time, i havent posted in like forever, but iots always great to see reviews even on old stuff.
if u could, thanx.
John
Rara Punk
2004-09-18
ch 1,
abuseCoolies. I really like it, and I complelty get the feeling, and the way you have written it, I'm sure even readers that havent been in that place will understand it too.
-Rock on! :D
Lady Lunara
2004-09-18
ch 1,
abuseWow, it's like what I think over and over again everyday.
Wow, wow, that words about all I can think of considering it's kinda scary how I feel just that way. I'm so tired, right now actually, sorry I can't give a better review, but it's 2 am. Great write keep it up.
confused being99
2004-09-18
ch 1,
abusenice...sums up a lot of my life...and tons other for sure...its good...and really truthful, nice job
~*~confused being99~*~
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