 Rai' Natia 2005-06-15 . chapter 1I really enjoyed reading this. It's a great example of how complete strangers end up finding something in common and creating a wonderful connection through it. Keep up the good work. =) |
 sunshower 2005-03-24 . chapter 1wow...this reminds me so much of my walk home from school before I moved house. I wonder what it is that keeps those silent barriers up between people. |
 Judith the Dark 2004-12-31 . chapter 1^^ That was beautiful. So poignant too! I have to say that's my favorite so far! Man, I love your style, I cannot say it enough!
(sorry going crazy with exclamations here, lol). This one goes on my favorites! |
 EmpathSadist 2004-10-01 . chapter 1That's so sweet serfy... So... This girl.. Are you together or can I have her? :D |
 Lousafer 2004-09-20 . chapter 1 pertty dam good, but next time help me. |
 JWren 2004-09-19 . chapter 1Wow. Thanks for all the super-fast comments. This is a good poem, and from your bio I can see you are truely in love with words. Would that I could surround myself with people like that. The idea in this poem is good. The words sweet. And the emotion raw. good work. |
 KittyAteMySanity 2004-09-19 . chapter 1Wow... great piece of poetry you've written there, I must say. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work. |
 simpleplan13 2004-09-19 . chapter 1that's such a sweet ending.. I love it! great poem! |
 Cloud Burst 2004-09-19 . chapter 1lol great poem, lol u got something wit kicking rocks, (wat hav they ever done to u??) lol well done on this! |