I really enjoyed reading this. It's a great example of how complete strangers end up finding something in common and creating a wonderful connection through it. Keep up the good work. =)

wow...this reminds me so much of my walk home from school before I moved house. I wonder what it is that keeps those silent barriers up between people.

^^ That was beautiful. So poignant too! I have to say that's my favorite so far! Man, I love your style, I cannot say it enough!

(sorry going crazy with exclamations here, lol). This one goes on my favorites!

That's so sweet serfy... So... This girl.. Are you together or can I have her? :D

pertty dam good, but next time help me.

Wow. Thanks for all the super-fast comments. This is a good poem, and from your bio I can see you are truely in love with words. Would that I could surround myself with people like that. The idea in this poem is good. The words sweet. And the emotion raw. good work.

Wow... great piece of poetry you've written there, I must say. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work.

that's such a sweet ending.. I love it! great poem!

lol great poem, lol u got something wit kicking rocks, (wat hav they ever done to u??) lol well done on this!