wow, great poem. I really liked it. I like the way you word things and your other poems have really great metaphors. Can't wait for your next one.

Serfy... This was... Wow... I like the anger.. I like the words, and I like the poem... It's very passionate... keep it up.

This is your best yet, in my opinion. I think that anyone who reads this can understand. I appriciate all the emotion you put into this poem, the feeling is what makes it phenomenal. I really like the lines "My lonely heart aches, And beats ever so slowly, And beats ever so loudly" You're so good at what you do.

Loneliness is the worst felling... feeling
Wow.. taht's a very powerful poem.. I can relate to it so well.. amazing amazing job!