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Dreams
William G. Thorne
2005-01-24 . chapter 1
5 7 5 is the traditional Haiku pattern, but this poem is fine how it is.
~William~
teh tarik
2004-09-23 . chapter 1
OMG, this one is so true, and it has an abstract feel to it. Like the title, this haiku has the ethereal quality of dreams and wishes-come-true in it. The word choice was simple, but effective. Great work.
Diana Bluefire
2004-09-20 . chapter 1
Great haiku. Keep it up.
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