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| octobertears 2006-02-05 ch 3, | abuseYou don't think anyone likes it. But I do. I love it. It's passionate but at the same time, not at all. Io is intriguing. I hope you update, I'd like to continue reading this story. |
| lspeakl 2005-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha. its a nice story. more angsty than i knew. and ra in a kind of indirect manner. hahas. i like the story development. its very.. smooth? nono. its very, full. yup. it dosent have loopholes or not that many that i spotted. but how she just melts into him blah blah is a bit corny. haha. ill leave this review at that. |
| ohhayhi 2005-04-08 ch 3, | abuseI really like this. It did go pretty fast in the beginng, but w/e. It's still really good. You should really write more soon. :) |
| kaytee 2005-01-21 ch 3, anon. | abusegood good story as well...hell all your work is good! |
| Gemini Angel 2005-01-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseyour story is fine, it just seems to move very quickly, and that can sometimes anger people...it has potential and your writing style is good~LuvGemini Angel |
| gish 2005-01-06 ch 3, anon. | abusei love this story...dont say no one likes it cause i swear i love it!I dont mean to sound over enthusiastic but your story combines everything i like.Io sounds really hot and i like how the girl isnt afraid to have sex with no strings attached.Anyway i just want to tell u that youre a great writer and that u have a great story on your hands.So keep up the good work! |
| Devonshirelass 2005-01-06 ch 3, | abuseI liked it. Does that count?! I thought it was well written too. |
| chileanchickie 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abusehey ** i didn't read your stupid ** story so don't even get your hopes up. why yah gatta be such a ** about it if yah didn't like my story then stop reading it but don't go ** balistic on me. keep your stupid ** opinions to yourself cause i don't want to hear it. ** you |