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| Hopeful Light 2004-09-20 ch 1,  | abuseTsk tsk...change the title...Besides that this piece was very cute in a romantic way! |
| Chandra-Moon 2004-09-20 ch 1, | abuseI definatly think you should change the title...it makes you sound like you don't know how to write! Which is why, when I started reading this story, i expected it to suck, but i was quite surprised. You had a good use of imagery, and it was creative and interesting. I liked it. Just change the title. |