You've got such an incredible talent.

"wondering when This destruction will become a form of creation". Only when that person has a sense of purpose, a reason to live will reconstruction of the soul commence. Very original indeed. great work

wow... that's amazing. Deep, powerful, shivering images. Amazing yet again. Can you share the talent?

again, not much i can say but well done. like the style and the concept, the actual content is kind of depressing, but that happens, i guess.

i like this. good work as usual ;)

This really is painful, the kind of painful poetry that brings tears to my eyes. It's well written and seems to really protray how you feel. Wonderful work.
Hawke

Thankyou for your reviews! I hope you don't take this offencively (i'd take it as a compliment) but i wasn't expecting your poetry to be this advanced and powerful :D. I really liked the metaphors and the way the last stanza's sentences are short, it really gives an impact. Well done

Its perfect. Please write another one. Congrades.