Read the big one, I'm not sure I'll be able to, I've got too many "big ones" to read already...oh well, doesn't matter, I guess I'll try to remember to. I love this story, if I had to pick a favorite character: The Bull...he knows what he's doin'. Haha...he reminds me of myself. Kudos, this was really cool.

Long Days and Pleasant Nights,

Gaki

This cracked me up. As in giggling outloud.

** may get you to the top, but it won't keep you there. Very true indeed, and very professionally narrated. Awesome job, I actually laughed. Ha ha...ha? I'm only kidding, this story was excellent, except a bit weird and freaky at times--and that part when the rooster eats the bull's **, that's just...weird.

Ha ha, I enjoyed it, I liked the rooster. Funny guy, actually. Too bad he decided to be an ** and start annoying the crap out of everyone. He was funny at the end, and ha ha, he got shot. LOL.

This story is pretty good, and while short, it has a very good moral in life, and it's awesomity was unmistakable. LOL again.

X-Eragon-X

lol, this was really funny. Especially since I'm majoring in **. Excellent. ^.~

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha... RANDOM LETTER TIME! jfoaepruiwearjewkfriewfjdkfewiojkesjiewfjirjufa

Sorry, sorry, my bad...too hyper...good moral, but I swear I've seen it on an e-card somewhere before. lolthanks for reading my story - if you find any mistakes or have any suggestions please review and tell me - remember: I LIVE FOR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM.And now I leave you...with my creative fluffy bunnies...Laterz~Reda~

I remember when you first told this to me back in high school. It was really funny, and it still is actually.

I liked the ending. I'd say, watch what your charecters say. It's all well and good that they talk like real people, but the key to humor is usually surprising your audience. ((After all, is a joke as funny when you already know the punchline?)) If your charecters just use phrases that the reader has already heard a bunch of times before they read the story, it's not as funny.