|Reviews for Good bye|
| amisi0099 10/12/08 . chapter 1
/this one makes me feel sad inside...
| Sosei13 9/28/05 . chapter 1
Woa...that was great. I wish I could write like that. But I am no poet. Nope. Ok...I read something else of yours...and decided that I wanted to read more of your writing. Since you are a great writer...yup...ok..bye. Much Love!Sosei
| TheDevilsAngel09 6/20/05 . chapter 1
another amazing poem, very sad and emotion, i love how in this line
"i hear death's horse's hooves"
wow, just the imagery of the horse and hooves amazing. get desctiptive as usual.
| Mistress-Nightmare 5/24/05 . chapter 1
wow, this is really strong and deep. I seriously love how you can rhyme and not make it sound forced. Thats hard for many people to do. I like the last 3 lines.
| scudcrow 10/6/04 . chapter 1
Very familial, by the way you've phrased the "Death's horse's hooves" and "I'm short of breath now...every one is subtle," you defnititely take the "pain" away.
| Out-Of-Reality 9/21/04 . chapter 1
That was so pretty yet sad but happy at the end. The emotions were so well expressed that I couldn't decide which one. It was just amazing!