Oh my God, this is so...scary. Seriously, I want to switch my computer off right now. The way she talks to it was positively creepy; and the 'The machine, a contraption consisting of metal, plastic, chips, screws and goodness knows what other things is the only friend she possesses in the world.' line is very sad. Well done, it's really original and gets to he readers, since they're sitting right in front of their computers _

This is a very beautiful yet haunting story. Reading this makes me actually scared of my computer. *shivers* Good job. Keep writing.

-music is everything

Okay, it's late at night, I'm reading this, and I have the urge to turn my computer off now. Seriously, when you wrote the part about her back being hunched, I actually straightened my posture. Ha...okay. Anyway, that is some powerful writing. I loved it. A creepy message about the thin line between man and machine. Excellent, excellen.

Love, moi

WOW. that was well written but VERY messed up...!

Postively gave me the creeps.

I'll never look at a computer the same way again, I think.

Beautifully haunting, I liked it.

HI!. um intresting story I haven't seen a story written like this before.
good work
see ya

I seriously felt ready to cry reading this.
Beautiful. And there definitely are people in the world like her.
Reminds me a lot of Lain from 'Serial Experiments: Lain'.

*claps hands* Excellent! Your story gripped my attention right until the very end. I loved the line, "If only I could melt with you, sweetheart, wouldn't we make a wonderful cyborg?" Pure genius! An amazing piece about social isolation and the delusions a twisted mind will cling on to. I'm adding this to my favourites. Two thumbs up! b_d

So hardcore...Rockin'.

*shiver* i could actually feel the emotion thingys from that. My computer scares me now. imagine if it actually said that it would be fine if i was obsessed with it and wanted to die with it. egh.

Wow, it's haunting, and amazing, very good vocabulary using. I'm very impressed. You caught the feelings of this story. When I was reading it, I felt like I was the wall, watching the girl's actions and speeches. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

That's awesome.
Brilliantly told.

found it to be very weird...
but then somewhat understandable...
L. Ellen

That was original, different to say the least. Very creative. Whats weird is, I can't help but think that there might actually be people that are like that.