wow! very powerful. i guess i am disrespectful because of the things that i do. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

Nice. Thanks 4 ur reviews. I especially appreciate this poem because it's something I'm forced to witness practically everyday. Insightful and important. Great job.

oh yeah, i like it.
lovely nephew you have there.
it's a nice poem
with a moral.
it'd be great for kids,
and great as a rap,
and simply great.
we should all read this
and learn something.
it's terrific.
-kismet.

This is one hell of an excellent job, i agree with you on that. here in asia, respect to elders is one of our priority. even today i dare not to raise my voice to people older than me, albeit strangers... great piece of poetrt!

good discussion n poem much luv