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brokenaura 2005-07-18 . chapter 1
so alone...poor broken matt
Saraphim 2005-04-06 . chapter 1
I tend to latch on to phrases. Ones that struck me here:

"Die with only one regretYour hand was not in mine."

"sorrow's blood"

"Drink the nectar of the stars"

"You embraced me for everything I was" Knowing you this one is especially powerful and brings me to understand how strong this love is.

I think the lover's wish is that he had died with his lover.
Kamay ko ang nagsulat 2004-09-24 . chapter 1
I love it. it's morbid... this is what i have been looking for... a writer whose emotion about love is spoken through such words... i guess we are the same... why don't you read mine? it's entitled 'Controled by Puppet Strings'. i hope you like it...
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