Thats the same exact thing that is going on in my life right now... Wishing that the guy i like would just notice that i feel this way about him. This is an excellent piece of work. Awesome job!

Another wonderfully written item _. I can relate, and have to agree with your philosophy (sorry, I have TERRIBLE spelling) at the end of this poem, "I should just dream and try to live happily". After all, it's the only thing to do in a case like that...-Rae

yet again this is great. The flow in this is brilliant. yet again well done
Keith Andrew

Ah, quite the relatable poem. I think every girl our age has been through that at least once during their years. _ The meter was much more refined than a poem I previously reviewed, and the rhyme scheme was impeccable. I see nothing but great improvement in your future. _
-Amanda