GAH!! so sad... how is it you manage to capture this thing i've been searching for in a few simple, touching, darkening, thought provoking, enlightening lyrics?

Bravo, hun. You've captured a feeling perfectly in this gem. I enjoy the wording and repetition. You have a talent to keep the writer's attention even if they have no idea what you're talking about. Keep up the good work!
~CM

Another amazing Awesome WOWINGpiece of poetry. I realate to this one so well also. I don't know how you do it but you write exactly what I need to hear. Never ever stop!