Funny thing making fun of my story when it is so similar to this one. Just a fact, nothing else. Very good descriptions of the fighters for an intro. Nice description of the scenery. A glimpse into the fighter's attitudes is always a good idea. You seem to understand why the people in my story have funny names, since if they used their real names anywhere, the police will catch them. We are very similar writers when it comes to stories like this, but even though you took many of the ideas from my story, I will agree that it is good, although not as much as the original.