Wow. I'd love to hear this with music. It's an excellent work. I love the title, I love every line. It's great.

why do i never learn is a bit awkward, but its ok i guess. oh and on the lost hope one i forgot to mention some typos. hehe ok i like this song thingy as well.

Love can be very blinding, i say the most blinding emotion in the world. Take a look at "Forlorn Feelings"- it's about how people I have loved in my life have abandoned me at different times in my life. Strong emotion!

I like it! It's so true! I feel this way alot, even thought thats probably not something to be happy about...
Pinky

that was "cool" lol... good job! and the title is cool too! keep it up!

Wow... *hugs* absolutely beautiful piece; painful as the frostbite it's named for, without a hint of cliches or unreality that I seem to get when I try to write anything so rawly emotional. And I do hope that you're all right...

That was brilliant. Really goes with the music I am listening to. That was amazing!

wow.. very pwoerful and nicely written.. I can definately relate. great job and thanks for your review!

the chorus is magnificent! jesus man! wow... fav stories for sure...

kickass dude! glad you finally came up with a title for it. Frostbitten.. it works! i can't believe it only took you 2 minutes to write this during class. i guess you can be a genius, but just to keep your ego in check.. remember that 'east coast' comment you made? lol, that was pretty dumb. hahaha!

Hm...very nice. Just a little bit creppy, but that gives it an exciting edge. Well done! Although, I'm pretty sure, not positive mind you, but I'm pretty sure that part's called a bridge.
Magz.

Again, I am absolutely and totally floored. I mean really. This is awesome. I love the imagery... oh, wow. Wow. Geeze. Wow. I'll tell you what, wow. (Forgive my lack of incoherency, standardized testing this week and so I have become temporarily mentally retarded.)

Kickass! I love it! You have an awesome rhyme scheme going for you in this one. Keep 'em coming!
Chaud