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| Riceman 2007-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI suppose it would seem like a drag if you didn't want to do it, but for me, those days that I had to run X amounts of laps, hit 'the plow' until my legs were throbbing, get knocked on my rear during 'bullrush', or take huge hits, from players twice my weight ... I'd have to say those were the best days of my life. (kind of melodramatic, I know, but I'd wanted to play for years beforehand, so I was pumped when I got to. I'm just kind of trying to convey the feeling eloquently.) But hey, if you don't like it, you don't like it. At least you gave it a shot. |
| LINDSEY 2007-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abusedin din = amazing. |
| tiger lily8 2004-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseOuch. Nicely put. Brief but to the point. |
| Hikari5 2004-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the story, I think it has a very "oral tradition" kind of feel, meaning this isn't the kind of story you put on paper so much as its one you tell someone about yourself when you first meet them, very cool though |
| wantedINheaven 2004-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOh don't even get me started on the injustices of being a girl on a boy's team! *hides and glares at no one in particular* Realyl nice read though, the essay flowed really smoothly and it was interesting how you put everything. And I don't like siblings like that. >. |
| brittney 2004-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abusehey! i love that story, even though its true, i loved the fact that you tried a sport and didn't care what other people thought about what you did, it was very brave, i would of never of had the guts to do what you did. and atleast its over! atleaset you got to run around with the boys but unfortuanately none of them were hot, exceppt for bobby! lol, okay well great story, bye bye!! xx~brittney |