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| reader 2004-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abusedisturbing! but really expressive |
| Cyssel 2004-12-04 ch 1,  | abusewith good description, you have captivated the essence of the poem excellently! such an eerie, outstanding, poem. good work there. |
| swift sky silver 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abusei love the use of vocabulary, rhythm and rhyme. quite graphic, in a good way i mean. you've definitely got the feeling across. =0) |
| Sarika 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abuseHello... I like this poem. It's got a sad ring to it though. Kind of reminds me of that porcelain doll head at the beginning of the movie Titanic... the one half buried in the sand... you know what I'm talking about? No? Truly haunting. - Sarika |