i like this, especially the first stanza, and how you slip your name in. you may want to watch your syllables, though. keep a fairly consistent pattern to help it flow, but other than that I think it's really good.

Aww thats really nice, It all flowed perfectly...great job! :D

ah wow... ur so good at this stuff!

Nice poem :)
I liked the pun of 'Hawke,' and the figurative language overall. It flowed nicely. Only change I might suggest is changing 'silken kisses' to 'silky kisses.' I think that might sound better.