|Reviews for Crazy, Beautiful|
| Black-Passion 11/30/04 . chapter 1
i like this, especially the first stanza, and how you slip your name in. you may want to watch your syllables, though. keep a fairly consistent pattern to help it flow, but other than that I think it's really good.
| u-will-never-know 9/25/04 . chapter 1
Aww thats really nice, It all flowed perfectly...great job! :D
| Cry Tears of Darkness 9/24/04 . chapter 1
ah wow... ur so good at this stuff!
| bayshel-wass 9/23/04 . chapter 1
Nice poem :)
I liked the pun of 'Hawke,' and the figurative language overall. It flowed nicely. Only change I might suggest is changing 'silken kisses' to 'silky kisses.' I think that might sound better.