Formatting issues - e.g. stick some line breaks between scenes to make easier to read and make to fit page as opposed to being bunched over one side. On the actual story front: good.

"No, actually, I came to flirt shamelessly with your daughter while you're not looking." Wow. You had me laughing harder than I have in ages.

By the way, to answer your question, Moroni is actually my favorite prophet from the Book of Mormon. Where did you come up with your name?

That was hilarious! I loved it.

Hm...interesting. But the puplic is dying to know...did they get hit by hurricane jeanie?

XD I laughed my butt off about three times... Gummi Worms of extreme and immense power? Moth eating couches? This is GENIUS.

XD I laughed my butt off about three times... Gummi Worms of extreme and immense power? Moth eating couches? This is GENIUS.

Good story... But may I suggest you move it to the *Plays* section?

Hehehe, funny funny funny!
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XDD This is SO FORKING AWESOME! A total, complete stroke of brilliance. It is SO going into my favorites. _

*picks herself up from the floor*
Thanks- I needed a good laugh, and that was HYSTERICAL!