i love it.

well done.

I loved it. It was slow romance. Very sweet. Great job )

i liked this. short, but it communicated a message, and i've never read something like this about commi china

This was beautifully written!

I could imagine everything.

The details are amazing!

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i think this was a well planned story, keep writing!

this is a really good story i loved it thax for sharing it wit everyone

Omg thats so sad that made me cry ;_; It's so beautiful, better than a poem, its just OMG WOW O_O *sobs* And this is how I feel right now... :(

OMG AMAZING WRITE!

So descriptive it's wonderful! Mooncakes, that sounds so delicous. I really loved this story. You know you are a great writer and you should continue writing. It worthless to have a wonderful hand of writing and not using as much as you can.

I'm eating mooncake as i read this. haha. great job!

Hey, I liked that! And so close to the Mooncake festival itself too. Your story was beautifully written and I liked your descriptions! And it made me a little hungry (okay, I'm actually hungry right now and reading it made me a little more). Maybe I'll go filch some mooncake from the kitchen right now...