Ooh dark and creepy!

Really good job, I think your word use was good (although sometimes you could have used better words). You never cease to amaze me.

~Ian- review me again and another review is coming your way.

I love how you don't give a definite person or thing you're talking about. All we know is that it all entwines with the night. Awesome. Very awesome.
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Regina O.B.

Awesome! I loved the descriptions and the choice of words, like silver pond reflection and flesh tomb. The ending was very good too. *favs list* ^^

Great punchy flow to this work, I like how it hits the reader with its stop start flow and harsh wording in places, really sets its mood well.
Good luck in all your works
Nine Iron

It gives me a feeling I cannot describe, but a good one, all I can think of is beauty... beautifully written! Keep it up!

Oh, pretty. Very deep, I like the different uses of night, nice a moving. Perfect ending, keep up the good work.