Cool. Thanks for the review. Saw your profile. CAROUSEL ROCKS...
~BLEACH BLONDES ROCK MY SOCKS~

whoa, this is awesome ash-chan (that isn't your real name is it?) god damn this is good material. i'm used to reading poetry with rhymes but dammit, this is really really good. ever think of becoming a poet for a living? think you got some potential to get off your ** and become a world famous poet! i believe in you as the insane friend of alyssa, i believe in you!

Damn you Ash-chan! If you ever say you suck at writing again, I'll personally murder you! You are one of the most amazing aspiring poets I have ever analyzed, so don't tell me you're terrible. I'm actually severely jealous of you!
I'm really feeling the words in this one, seeing as I'm kind of liberal in my thoughts. And in a time when our society runs on conformity and self-deception, I can't see a reason why this isn't an anthemic poem for humanity. It really hit a nerve for me, which is pretty rare unless the nerve's hit in anger (that's a whole other story).
This one's pretty short, but I really enjoyed it. It's one of those poems where the short length doesn't bother me too much.
Well, excellent job, Ash-chan!