Wow... that was really sweet. The way you worded the poem seemed a bit foreign but still brilliant in its own way to me. Nice..

oo... wow. I've read many things on here... never something as uniquie, beautiful, and simply magestic as this. It's a sad story... and it's wonderful. Amazing... truly...*favorites*

...Wow. This was really unexpected- the whole concept of a girl dancing to ease pain and sorrow. Some beautiful imagery here.

The poem flowed nicely but some of the rhymes seemed a little forced to me, but I'm picky. =P The rest of the words chosen were fit in very well, though. In any case, this is a great poem! =D Keep writing. =)

This is one of the best pieces I have read on fictionprss yet. Such beautiful imagery and the right amount of sappiness. I could feel the girl twirling as she wished for rain amongst other things. Very sacred piece...beautiful. Your stanzas flowed and no awkward breaks. Very nice. Bravo to you.

wow o.o;; awesome poem..i love dancing in the rain ^^

That...that...wow.

That went on my favorites list.

There are some things that don't rhyme in here. And the ending didn't seem to actually sound like one, it didn't have that finalizing 'tone'.

But other than that, beautiful, if not redundant.

you're a great writer! i love this poem, the rhyme, the ryhtem, it all fits.

EA

i have to say this is aweosme, just like i was when i was kid, only i danced pretty much on the roof of the apartment building or in the park down the street, since i lived in new york city. anyway, i'd lvoe to beta something for you if you still need a beta. not that you really need one, since i hardly ever find anything wrong with your work. keep up the good work.

This poem is amazing, the words just flow-like rain;) i truly love your poem~LuvGem

Nice. Cool! Wish I could write poetry like that. You're intelly-gent.

Tee hee!

That was possibly the sweetest poem I've ever read (while having a few minor glitches). Wayttago!

This almost seemed like it could be a song it had such a nice rythm to it, and I liked all the fleshed out descriptions.

Hehe, that was quite a nice poem. ^^

I loved this poem. When I write poetry, I prefer to work with free verse, but I love the rhythm of the poem. The poem paints such a vivid image in my mind.

wow, this is a really nice poem. I'm definetly faving this poem! ^__^