wow.. that's totally insane... i really really hope i never have anyone like that stalk me... but it's a really good story and all that jazz~~Baby Dyke Rae~

That was so good Justin you're getting better than when I 1st met you a lil over a year ago. Also I know the Maria in the story isn't based on me...she's the total oppsite of me hehee. I'm more like Tashias. I would love to see a squel

That was very different to a lot of stuff ive read on here and quite interesting too! The ending felt a tad rushed but you really worked well on building up Marias creepiness, that was very good! Like that fact that you weren't afraid to get graphic as well. Keep writing!

whoa... that as tragic.

The top name is really my fp name. I was tired to log on. I think this is fantastic. The ending was sad. I did not really see it coming...Keep it up.

WOW! Very, very excellent piece of work!

pretty good...u have great talent

AW...*sniff sniff* I think u might notice tht I am a very emotional person! Tht was just sad!! *opens mouth in awe* WOW!

That was very-creepy.

(shivers)

lol

i really liked this story...well paced and kinda scary! you could easily make a novel outta this! if you do more please email me ta!