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i love life 2008-09-04 ch 9,	abuseyay ralph is back i really missed him in the past chptr. i love this story pls update soon cant wait to read more
pheonixorion10 2008-07-04 ch 9,	abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON i really want / need to know what happens its a really good storyline so far i love allison se is awesome but i cant choose drystan or kaleb ?
CreativeChick233 2008-05-10 ch 9,	abuseLove the storyy!! update soon okayy please if you leave this story hanging i will hate you forever =] j/k..i hope!
Salienah 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abusei want you to continue this so badly!!
Mary's.Song 2008-05-03 ch 9,	abuseEVIL! YOU ARE EVIL! YOU MUST UPDATE! FAST! HURRY! GET TYPING! :P
Salienah 2008-04-30 ch 9,	abusethis story is so great! i wonder why you stopped so suddenly? please update soon with anything! i'm really impressed with how awesome this story is--the plot is a little cliche at times, but the characters themselves and our heroine totally make up for it. :D
The Latest Plague 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseOne question: Are you alive?? If you are, you're cruel! How long do you plan on making your readers suffer in waiting? Get to get with the next chapter, missy! :)
mia5081 2007-11-10 ch 9,	abuseI love your story, just really, really love it. It's both funny and serious and I can really feel Jessica's pain because of her weight. And I love both Drystan and Kaleb, and I kinda just flip back and forth between them but I most definitely don't like Ralph...even though I find some of his behavior really weird lol Update soon please!! ~Mia
TheGodMachine 2007-10-14 ch 9,	abuseAwesome story! I'm so torn up about who I want Jessica to end up with in the end. I love Kaleb, I was totally rooting for him, but now this whole senario with Ralph has me interested, expecially since its being introduced in the ninth chapter. It makes me wonder that something has to happen since its suddenly happening. I also like Drystan (even though I'm rooting for Kaleb), he's a real sweet guy. Jessica gives hope for all those overweight girls out there (I wish I had sweet guys to fight over me). I hope you update soon!
alayahop 2007-09-28 ch 9,	abuseWhen will you update?! It feels like I'm addicted to this story. Can't wait to see what will happen next. hm and what's up with Ralph? ;)
iKo*sinR 2007-09-23 ch 9,	abusegreat story; i'm hooked! please update soon :)
darkside-cookies 2007-09-12 ch 9,	abuseLove this story! Hope you will continue to update/write it!
chloe 2007-09-11 ch 9, anon.	abuseheya omg plz update i have been waiting for an update for ages and i still reread the story many times. yes the story is THAT gud lol anyways hope u aint gonna discontinue it! xoxoxoxoxoox
oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE 2007-08-18 ch 9,	abuseaw that was so cute! i like this story and its really good and its adorable. i love that bothe drystan and kaled are both fighting for her and she doesnt notice...aw the innocence..XD now im think that ralph likes her too...oh a love tringale!lol soo yeah i also noticed that u havent updated in a while and thats kinda disapointing...its because i think you forgot about the story and its really good to b forgotten...oh well maybe you just have a REALLY bad writers block... well cant wait for more chocolate!!
Drogan 2007-06-29 ch 9, anon.	abuseOh gracious it's takin' me a tad bit longer to get around to writing a review than it really should have! Oh well, better late than never XD Alrighty so from what I recall leaving off from in 8, Jessica abruptly left the gym to go home, but was caught up by Kaleb and soon after a hostile Drystan accompanied by Skylar and Allison. From there they decide to go to Skylar's house in which begets chapter 9. 'k so from the beginning I've just found this amusing with Jessica sitting on a little loveseat between both Drystan and Kaleb and attempting to make 'normal' conversation. I believe at one point Kaleb and Skylar briefly traded names which kinda threw me off, but I figured it out just fine. I'm also rather surprised at how respectful Skylar was to Allison meekly kissing her cheek as opposed to being a 'guy' and being a good deal more touchy-feely. Then after narrowly escaping that Ralph creep, Jessica gets a nice ride from Kaleb in which intrigues me as to how close the two are getting from opening up more.. in fact, I was suprised that Kaleb didn't really say or inquire about anymore before he dropped Jess' off, I can't say I really took him for the shy/hesitant type. or perhaps he's just as confused or simply enjoying 'courting' :p The next day during training, Terrence shows up and sheds light on Ralph's state of.. whatever it is 0.o ... so weird.. k so then Drystan takes Jessica home and they go inside her house where they have a conversation that I think adds a little more depth to the story. So Drystan apparantly comes from a lower class side of town and he kinda lucked out on his Corvette which must've taken some work no doubt. But the fact that they legitimately debate on a real issue of social class structure and how "there's no middle class" just gives more of a contrast from the seeming pleasantville that's overcast the town thus far. And then he kisses her cheek teehee and agree to go see his place. I'm quite interested in seeing what happens in the next chapter is his place really that bad? or is he just being melodramatic? haha, Drystan 'I'm a poor man's son from across the railroad track, the only shirt I own is hangin' on my back, but I'm the envy of every single guy 'cause I'm the apple o' my girls eye". So yeah, update again soon... or else! ;p

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