This was good, straight to the point and very emotional. The last line was lke the final blow, and a shock to me. Well done.

wow.. powerful end there... tahnks for your review.. I posted the poems in span. if ya wanted to read them

wow, Aaron. Those are some powerful words my friend! i hope your friend doe read this, cuz it shows you care. great job!
love
amber

wo... another suicide poem
i liked the poetic devices u used in this though
good job