 GoDrOx 2006-07-25 . chapter 1Wow.. I believe this definitely has a deeper meaning into it.. that is why I don't get it..:DBut truly, this is a wonderful story.. Good job.. |
 explosionsss 2006-01-15 . chapter 1It's a very simple story with nice meaning. I loved it. |
 Evilstrawberry 2005-06-13 . chapter 1I like it. It seems to sum up the feelings you get from all the stupid little bad things that happen every single day which should mean nothing but really mean so much. |
 Panela 2005-04-21 . chapter 1Wow. This seems like an ordinary story about a woman's trials baking a cake, but it made me think. There seems to be a gentler, purer, meaning to this... |
 Anne Christy 2005-03-18 . chapter 1Just wondering, how is that romance? Not that it isn';t good, its just not the right catogory. Unless that is I'm missing a deeper meaning.WHich I very well might be. So yeah, Good job! |
 F.L. Tybush 2004-09-30 . chapter 1With this short, there is a question on where to being reviewing. It has so many different great aspects. A seemingly straightforward narrative about a women's frustration is only the veil for more deep rooted phylisophical ideas. This writer has a great sense of how to create stories that one must think intensely about to truly understand. It's refreshing to see this kind of deep writing in the world today. |