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| j.d. egan 2007-09-04 ch 1,  | abuseGreat piece of writing. Good job! |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 12, | abuseSilly boys! How could they not notice they lived so close?! Ian's Mum is really cool for helping Malik stay with Ian. And Richard looks like a nice guy too. Well, that was a nice ending to a wonderful story. ^_^ |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 11, | abuseWesley and Travis are so cool. Saffron seems to be cool too, as well as Mizuki. :-) And it's great that Ian's mother is supportive of his relationship with Malik. ^_^ |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 10, | abuseOh! The angst of separation! *sniff* Indeed, it would be great if they could live together. Eh eh! It was funny that they didn't know where the other one was living. What were they talking about during all this time together? Or more exactly, what were they doing? ;-) |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 9, | abuseAh, boys will be boys! They spend their time kissing, and later decide to be boyfriends. *giggles* Anyway, they're just too cute together. ^_^ |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 8, | abuseOh! Seth and Yugi are so cute together. ^_^ Also, Carla rocks for protecting them. :-) |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 7, | abusePoor Malik! So his parents don't care about him. :-( But Ian does! I think this chapter was even more moving than the previous ones, because here Malik was completely desperate. I guess the fever wasn't helping. *lets Ian hug Malik* |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 6, | abuseOh, Malik is ill. :-( Honestly, after what Malik said, Ian could have thought of telling him where he was going, even though it meant waking him up. Because Malik must have felt really bad when he woke up and discovered that Ian wasn't there any more. |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 5, | abuseYay for Wesley and Travis! ^_^ This was fun and hot. *giggles* Plus, it was a nice change from the angst of the other chapters. Not that I mind now going back to Malik/Ian goodness. ^^ |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 4, | abuse*hugs Malik now* Poor boy, who also has nightmares. I hope what happened to him was not as bas as what happened to Ian. Though from the fact he's afraid that Ian might abandon him, I wonder if his mother didn't leave when he was a kid. Next chapter sounds interesting. Yes, I'm as perverted as you are. ;-) |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 3, | abusePoor, poor Ian. I'm glad he told Malik about what happened, because Malik is a caring person and wouldn't have abandoned him because of that. But of course, it's not surprising that Ian was afraid of telling him. *lets Malik hug Ian* |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 2, | abuseYou're so good at writing angst. This is really moving and I love how you write the thoughts of the two teenagers. Yay for Malik, who's so nice to Ian. :-) |
| Profiterole 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was a really moving first chapter. What a sad nightmare! I want to hug Ian, but I think I'll let Malik take care of that. ;-) I haven't read Camp, because I have no time. :-( But it doesn't seem to keep me from understanding the story, so that's good. |
| Esquirella 2004-12-15 ch 12, | abuseVERY happy with the ending! Very, VERY happy! And I was happy to support this story. It was wonderful! |
| Eagle Seance 2004-12-05 ch 11, | abusehaha i loved the first section- that was funny (the bit about travis). And everything else was great. more please! |