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| breakme 2005-01-21 ch 1,  | abuseaww... its really sweet but really sad."Can’t you hear my heart break"that line was really good. You asked what satisfaction cutting brings to me... It's really... difficult to explain. Its like the world is melting away. It brings about a calm flighty wonderful im-so-very beautiful and everythings okay now 'cause im smiling feeling... if that makes any sense... Its not good though...Its a really weak pathetic way to deal with stuff. I stopped... mostly. |
| Kalopsia 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abusea sad poem. yet beautiful and desireful. |
| Twilit Exaggerance 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseGenerally, well wrote, although could be spaced out a bit more. And girls are confusing in general. Way life is. |