LOVE IT! I've tried running from life, it doesn't work.

hmm, some powerful imagery here, Its almost like you're talking right to me! well, thanx for your review, I hope to hear more from you.

Another well-flowing free verse poem. I love it! lol. It's so...dark yet..not. The words are thick with imagery, which is always a plus in a poem. ^_^ Keep on writin'!

I quite liked this. Post more!
One of my favorite lines was "your own deep Pit-y." I love the play on words.

^^ I like this one. It's very...very...darn it! I don't know the word (T-T) but it's very good either way...
Interesting how this subliminally says darkness is the only way out.