Very cool. I love combat and commando boots too. I enjoy the attitude, and random insights... Good story. Keep posting.

hm... some little things in this seem a little reminiscent of my melodramatic monologue (damn Linkin Park, why'd they have to be so damn good?!). HA. I like this story a lot. That's why it's on my favorites list. I think you need to clarify if Jace and MAtt are still alive or dead or whatever. it's kind of confusing at this point. Just some basic tense changes can do wonders for tht sort of thing. And as for MMLS, yeah, I know the end sucks, and it's something I'm working on. I probably just need the right Linkin Park song to try to emulate with the ending, and voila, it'll be the best damn ending anyone could possibly imagine. keep writin'!

I LOVE IT
MORE MORE
MORE MORE
xoxox
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Really good. I don't have anything much to complain about, the plot is good and you writeing is good, only a couple of spelling mistakes. Please update soon.

M... sweet plot development, and the intriquing new kid. Nice.

And the plot thickens!
THE SHEEPIES DEMAND MORE MORE MORE..
MWAHAHA
They'll EAT UR CHEESE!
xoxox
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Love chapter two aswell.

Love the story, please keep going and update soon.

"I guess everyone else in the class thought it was though, because as *a* packed my things into my backpack,"
I put what I thought to be a typo in *'s. Just thought you may want to know.
I love the fic! Her personality is great, and that she doesn't define herself as a goth I give points to. :D

Well, this certainly adds quite a bit of depth to the story, doesn't it? Keep up the good work!

I WANT MORE!
I LOVE IT
I ADORE IT
I JUST LOVE HER ATTITUDE
I JUST ADORE HER ATTITUDE
MORE
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This is cool. I like how it sticks out from every other crazy kid at a messed up boarding school story out there. Keep writin'!

It's too long but really good!

whoa. That was really good. I'm definitely looking forward to more chapters.

Nice beginning! Your character obviously has a unique voice, and an interesting perspective on the world. The only thing I might suggest is trying to match her in-depth thoughts and reactions to things to the dialouge. For example, she might have a great insight or analysis on something, but then uses horrible grammar to talk to anyone else. Other than that, I thought it was very engaging and well written!