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littletealjar. 2009-11-17 . chapter 8
the guy holding Elliot is rather cute, if I do say so myself! In a rugged, "me man, you woman" kind of way.

hopefully he shaves his beard O_o

and i am very cross with whatshername, the lesbian! you do not just leave your rather boney and socially inept friend alone at a train station in who-knows-where! what a **.
littletealjar. 2009-11-17 . chapter 1
i love it already, and the foreplay is just sexy ;)
Jadwiga 2008-09-27 . chapter 30
Absoultely adorable fic! I loved/*adored* Elliot ~ he was so cute, funny and damn sacarstic (and so quintesentilly English), and hilarious when obsessed with sex.

Thought Alik was great too and a fabulous foil for Elliot, those two really suit each other. I also liked Chris and Cynthia.

In conculsion: Lovely plot (at times hot and steamy) with even more engaging characters ~ well done!
nomy 2008-02-02 . chapter 30
i am the type of reader that review with 'i love your story' or ' i like it so much!'..so its kinda lame to say the same thing over and over again and you kinda get bored of it, i guess..
so... what the hell i still going to say that I LOVE IT!love it,its kinda an understatement..


i just freaking adore,love,like crush and bla bla bla..hahahaha..but its true..at first truely i kinda dont want to read this one..cause you make it in 1900 or is it 1800...?

i dont know its kinda confusing at certain time on what time period that you do..as i notice the word 'internet' at the beginning of a chapter so i think its kinda a typo mistake..

but when i continue to read it cause i definitely one of the people that need a happy ending cliche..and its a mind blowing story!..

i love how you just make a short chapter but its kinda make sense as in you just explain it and didnt left it hanging..

so its kinda cool that way...and i love the cahracter and the bounty hunter idea and you know what? i love it all!!...so thank you for writing an amazing story!...its a very enjoyable for me to read it!!..^_~
lakuniko 2007-08-03 . chapter 30
really really cool story. funny and cute and romance.
love this fic to death^^
CM 2007-08-02 . chapter 30
I had a hard time fuguring out the time frame at the beginning, but the story made my evening. Thank you!
Kilian 2006-11-25 . chapter 30
I like Elliot. He gets kidnapped and just shares jockes with his kidnapper. Must be English composure. And I like this wife of his. She's very funny. And… well I found Greg nice too. Actually the whole story was pleasant and I suspected the wife was the one putting the bounty as soon as you made Elliot become attracted to Alik.
Anti-Socialite 2006-09-13 . chapter 29
Ok first of I need to thank you for the link to that Rembrandt painting. Second of all, I am a hopeless romantic and this story was ** brillant! I was all sad up until this chapter and now I'm so happy he came back that I can't stop giggling! You really are a brillant writer.
Aquarian Angel 2790 2006-08-18 . chapter 30
OMG! i am forever in love with this story. Elliot and Alik, *blissful sigh* it was so amazing. And damn that cynthia she almost ruined it. yet with out her it would have never happened. For that i thank her. I love Elliot, hes so damn cute. And Alik, hes definietly not a brute, hes a sweetie. i love them both forever*hugs and kisses* and i love you for writing it. wonderful work
Talaquinn 2006-07-16 . chapter 29
fun, hot, and interesting. Great story.
Tate Soyker 2005-11-16 . chapter 29
OMG, This was amazing! I absolutely loved it. Trying to figure out the time period was a little confusing but I figured it out eventually. I kinda guessed that it was Cynthia who put the bounty on him but it was still really awesome. I am add this to my favorites and definately checking out some of your other stuff. Keep up the good work.
Behind-these-eyes 2005-08-11 . chapter 1
Wow. I must say I was captured by the very first paragraph. This is very, very well writen, and a wonderful beginning.

*goes off to read more*
Shadowing Chaos 2005-05-19 . chapter 29
Oh man, where do I begin... You have yet to cease amazing me with your talent. This is another great story.

Once again, I like the character building here. And... I kind of found the the main characters here somewhat similar to "Absinthe Desires". Both stories introduce a quiet, gentle, and intellegent individual in the beginning. Then the more "brute" lover appears next. Some of my friends would say the quieter character intrugued by the "rough" type is cliche...but I beg to differ. They way you write that type of pairing is great.

As for the plot... you and those plot twists. ;) Here's me thinking that someone truly wants Elliot dead...when it's only his friend Cynthia that needs his expertise in literature to teach in New York. Boy was I releived that he wasn't going to die.

To close up here, I've really enjoyed this story, and as mentioned before in a different review, I plan on reading the rest of your stories. Great work! Ciao.
M L 2005-05-04 . chapter 29
I love this story, but it won't let me open the 30th chapter. Argh, I'll see if it's working later.
RetrogradeHeadspin 2005-04-29 . chapter 29
Bloody brilliant. Nice unique storyline. If this was ever turned into a film I'd go see it.
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