|Reviews for Destination|
| Liebchen Rose 4/22/05 . chapter 1
Wow...this is fantastic! You're poetry is so vivid!LR
| Manuel Fajar 10/2/04 . chapter 1
Good draft, lots of great ideas, . . . m
| Cry Tears of Darkness 10/1/04 . chapter 1
this is good, i like it :)
| bayshel-wass 9/28/04 . chapter 1
Wow...very powerful. Only one suggestion: I think the word "stupid" could be changed, maybe to "dumb."
I really liked the phrase "within death's cold embrace we lie."