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| Reviews for Destination |
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  Liebchen Rose 4/22/05 . chapter 1 Wow...this is fantastic! You're poetry is so vivid!LR |
 Manuel Fajar 10/2/04 . chapter 1Good draft, lots of great ideas, . . . m |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 10/1/04 . chapter 1 this is good, i like it :) |
| bayshel-wass 9/28/04 . chapter 1 Wow...very powerful. Only one suggestion: I think the word "stupid" could be changed, maybe to "dumb." I really liked the phrase "within death's cold embrace we lie." |
