beautiful!

thats soo good!! and the title really matches the poem. : )

At this moment, that's exactly how I feel. You do a wonderful job expressing feelings.

*~Evelyn Hayden~*

Not sure what to think of this one. I have to say- asking somebody to shove you off the edge... that's a little unnerving to read. You definitely made the feeling of being trapped very clear. Not wordy, nothing dramatic- just plain as day... looking for 'a way out'. Unsettling to read, but good just the same! ;-)