Nicely done. It was quite fabulous. It sounded heartfelt and real, and...tired. Wonderful poem, I enjoyed it.

" i am your life support
i am your beep. beep. beep."
excellent.

you've inspired me! I love this! I love this! I LOVE THIS! "bep. beep beep beep." You should be elevated to god status here. I want to put on favorites.

I love not only the format but the last two lines. So true...
Keep writing
.:midnight:.