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| Tom Madden 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseawesome work. definitely is full of meaning and despair. And i can relate considering i've been there and totally blew it. *stupid, stupid*. anyway, enough of me banging my head against my desk.. really nice work! |
| Marydid 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseI like it a lot. This poem is very relatable for anyone who ever loved a friend. The confused feelings really come out. Good job! =) |
| Midnight In Eden 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseI love the last four lines, it just really culminates the end of the poem. The sad tone I got from the whole poem really comes out there. Beautiful work. .:midnight:. |