Very Bittersweet. I loved it.

That was bad? NO WAY! Do people die from AIDS Like, if ou have it you definitely will die? Was that a one-sho? Please no. And make them live. Let them LIVE!

lol. So it's fluff! Nothing wrong with that... it's actually incredibly sweet, I really like it. Good job! :)

It's not bad! Ok, I'll admit it's not your best, but if you stick with it and maybe tweak it a little, it'll be perfect! I still love it. I mean, it's slash, AIDS, and its written by you! What's not to love? :) Keep writing!

I didn't think it was bad! It's good! Keep writing!